Bio Poem

George

Smart, loyal, strong and sensible

Sibling of Jinlong

Lover of reading, games and staring contests

Who feels happy, sad, pain and awesomeness

Who needs air, love and food

Who gives presents , friendship and kindness

Who fears height, death and drowning

Who would like to see ancient European temples, the Amazon and Venus

Resident of Onehunga

My Did You Ever Poem

My did you ever poem.

WALT write about a personal experience using a poetry form

Success Criteria: I know I will be successful if I focus and not get distracted too much.

• follow the structure of the model
• use fragments instead of sentences
• paint vivid pictures using words that use the senses (see, hear, touch, feel, taste)
• use only nouns and ‘ing’ form of verbs

Task: Publish your poem below. Add a photo if you have one or get a photo from the internet - use Tools/Research/find image to suit Upload your doc to your e-portfolio - publish to the Web Remember to use tags: Year 5, Writing. Write a reflection about how successful you have been - refer back to the SC

Did you ever…

Go to Parakai Springs?

People splashing         

Babies shouting

Kids running.

Did you ever...

Imagine how fun Parakai Springs could be?

People laughing

Children playing

Teenagers sliding

Unforgettable memories

Awesome moments

I enjoyed it.

My Reflection:

I'm proud of my work
It was tricky to find the picture.
Next time I need to improve on getting it done faster.

Blog Welcome Post 2015

Welcome to my Year 5 learning blog .

This year I am in Room 25 and my teacher is Mrs Hodge.  I am looking forward to a great year of fun and learning.

Please read my blog whenever you can and leave an encouraging comment and/or feedback on my work.

George