Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts

Monday, 19 September 2016

Show Don't Tell - Camp MERC



Reflection:
This was really hard at some parts and really easy at different parts of the writing.
The hard part was thinking of the "show" part of the plan, altogether I think I did quite well for this activity but next time I think I can do better by trying to remember events that happened so it's easier to retell the story.

A Perfect Spring Day

Thursday, 18 August 2016

My Speech 2016



Reflection:
  • It was hard to make my speech long enough.
  • It was easy to find information for my speech.
  • Next time I need to probably add more humor because its boring at some places.

Friday, 17 June 2016

Holiday AD



Last term we made ad of what we want to do for the holidays and this is the one me and Cameron.
We used a help from a "special" happy customer a.k.a a person in our class, it took us a while cause there was a technical difficulty where we couldn't record but it was fixed.
It was tricky to fix the technical problem
It was easy to make the animation

Wednesday, 23 March 2016

The 100 Word Challenge



Reflection
We are learning to choose words carefully.
So we could only use 100 words and write a story at the same time which is very hard because some words can't be added because it might exceed the 100 words limit.

The Maori Genderoles


Reflection
We are learning how to write a explanation writing and we are writing about the Maori gender roles because we were reading a book called whale rider by NZ person called Witi Ihimaera this was hard because I didn't know much about the Maori culture.

Next time I need to use more better words instead of just using one interesting word which is quandary.

Friday, 19 February 2016

Kennings Poem

The First Day Of School




This work was hard because it was the first day of school so I didn't expect to need to remember everything and use my senses.
Next time I need use my senses more to describe what happened on the first day.

Tuesday, 23 June 2015

Fact and Opinion

Statistical Investigation




I have learned the PPDAC cycle which is problem , plan , data , analysis and conclusion.

It was tricky to get the data.

It was easy to get the analysis done.

Tuesday, 24 March 2015

One Hundred Word Challenge






It was 108 words long.
It was tricky to use less words so it is about 100 words.
It was easy to think of a interesting story.
Next time I could improve on using lesser words.

Wednesday, 25 February 2015

Bio Poem

George
Smart, loyal, strong and sensible
Sibling of Jinlong
Lover of reading, games and staring contests
Who feels happy, sad, pain and awesomeness
Who needs air, love and food
Who gives presents , friendship and kindness
Who fears height, death and drowning
Who would like to see ancient European temples, the Amazon and Venus
Resident of Onehunga